Death of the King 10,11 & 12

Chapter 10
After 30 minutes,Morvin found the rock.He pulled it out with his strength and it came out.Morvin put the sword in his back pack,making sure it did not break.After that,Haikel took out the Scroll of Hints again.It read,"Whatever you do,please don't fall.For it might break you,for all.""Weird...."Vicky said.
Chapter 11
Whatever that meant,Morvin thought."What are you waiting for?!We got a village to save!"Navi said.The four walked and on and on until they were tired.They took a short nap while Hades began meditating.The next day,they found they were surrounded with big tanks.The big tanks were covered with lots of skeleton.They began to move.They took out their swords.They covered the tent with their bones.Suddenly,a comet appeared out of nowhere.The comet began to drop at the tent.The comet hit the skeletons and did not hurt the tents.The five ran out of there.Short while,they stopped suddenly.Some stones fell from the cliff and fell for a long time."Ok,lets move!Dont fall down."Haikel ordered the 4.Concentrating,the five began walking slowly onto the line.
Chapter 12
Hades nearly fell when Navi held him.They looked at each others faces.Navi blushed then continued walking onto the line.Navi looked down,still blushing,then continued walking.Haikel reached the end of the rope,followed by Morvin,Nicky,Navi and Hades.Haikel took out his scroll of hints.It read,"For the next test,you must be careful,as it can be,kinda painful.Wait for the green light,as it may be,the only hope,you may live until the night.".

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Great job... I'm loving the story so far.