I miss you... please forgive me. (Poem)

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I miss you... please forgive me. (Poem)

Post  ezzavix on Fri Aug 13, 2010 6:12 am

Tonight seems colder then most,
I wish you were here,
But the time together is now a ghost,
And it's been over one year.

Not one day goes past,
When I regret our conflicts,
Oh but how time goes fast,
And now the past constricts.

I wish I could take back,
Everything I said,
Everything comes as a big flashback,
It pains my head.

The shouts,
The screams,
And What was it all about?
Why do I have these constant dreams?

Is it because I left you?
Because you hate me?
For everything I say and do,
I am really sorry.

It was my fault,
Now you aren't here,
I'm such a cult,
I left you there.

From the bottom of my heart,
To the top of my head,
I wish we weren't apart,
I wish you weren't dead...

((This poem is based on something BIG coming up in the main storyline. this is a hint for future posters.))
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Post  Guest on Fri Aug 13, 2010 10:51 am

You did a GREAT job on this!

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Post  ezzavix on Fri Aug 13, 2010 10:54 am

Thanks... For my poems I like to make them up on the spot for fun, I was real bored waiting for members to arrive.
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Post  Guest on Fri Aug 13, 2010 11:07 am

Once again, I'm sorry that I wasn't on yesterday. I'll also be gone for a little bit today. I'm going with my mom to one of her friend's house.

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Post  ezzavix on Fri Aug 13, 2010 11:13 am

That's OK, I wasn't on for longer then five or more minutes, I was the only one of two from memory.
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Post  Guest on Fri Aug 13, 2010 11:21 am

Ah, well, okay. I still need to make more of an effort to go on here, and stop chatting with DH and Jolt, and also RPing with Jolt.

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Post  ezzavix on Fri Aug 13, 2010 11:27 am

Do you know who is saying what to whom in the poem?
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Post  Guest on Fri Aug 13, 2010 11:40 am

Would it happen to be Dixy saying it to one of her family members?

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Post  ezzavix on Fri Aug 13, 2010 11:52 am

Nope... It's Kiba to Nightshadow... It may seem confusing at this time but all will be explained further in the story.
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Post  Guest on Fri Aug 13, 2010 11:57 am

Hmm...were they in love with each other at one point?

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Post  ezzavix on Fri Aug 13, 2010 12:02 pm

No, They used to be friends before the story began, they drifted away and come close as friends again, but Nightshadow gets killed, not by Kiba but she didn't do anything to help because by then she was told about Nightgale.
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Post  Guest on Fri Aug 13, 2010 12:08 pm

Ah, I see.

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Post  ezzavix on Fri Aug 13, 2010 12:21 pm

My other random poem is the other one.
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